Persuasive writing( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Hi people we are learning to write a piece of  persuasive writing here it is I hope you like it.

In my opinion I that all school days should start later. Here is my on opinion about all school days starting later.

Firstly I think that student have to get up SO early. For example I got to bed at 12 o’clock and had to wake up at 6 o’clock and I didn’t learn anything that day at school.

Secondly teachers will have more time to plan and sleep. For example   one day Mrs Toms didn’t have time to plan so she just said go on sumdog.

 Finally that means that students have more time to get to school. For example one day I was  late because there was so much traffic   

but if school started later I wouldn't be late.

In conclusion I believe that school should start later.